"War should be illegal" favourite essay(～￣▽￣)～
Everyones Everyone’s know that war has always been one of the worst and most disgusting and destructive events that can happen. War is necessary in socio-economical socio-economic sense that two mens two men fight each other to know who is better and more powerful. War didn't brings peaceful does not bring peace but more than the death of their people. In my humble opinion, I truly believe in commentor's commentator’s word on news that “war should be illegal". There are three reasons to support this statement which are war can cause lack of a place to stay, daily resources will be limited and the destruction of world.
First and foremost, war can make us living in trouble. This is because we can gets in trouble like lack of a place to stay for safety and personal protection. Wars are War is a scary thing because they will use force an inhuman like guns, booms and warships to take over the colony. For example, As an illustration, hot news and never ending, Palestine and Israel. Everyone knows that these terrorists want to take over Palestine land and claimed that's their land. They even scared of child with rock meanwhile they have guns. They are so embarrassing and cruel. They will kill and raped muslim Muslim women for fun. So, we can gets see that war is very worst and most disgusting event that ever existed. Thus, we should stopped should stop war before we lack of a place to stay for safety and personal protection then we must give awareness to society and ourselves that war is a very bad act and should be illegal in this world forever.
Secondly, daily resources will be limited. In beginning of war, At the beginning of the war, we have no time for farming, shopping and get delicious food right now at that time. We just thinking of death. For example, Africa is popular of dry country because they have no much food for their people they do not have an adequate supply of food for the people of the country. Their people very skinny and helpless because their resources are limited. It is not easy for them to live there forever because their water resources are also polluted. This is an example of a country that has no resources. Can you imagine a country that is at the war with guns, boom, warships? Even worse. Therefore, war will cause death due to lack of food and drinking resources. This is one of the strong reasons why we should make war an illegal act to save more people from getting into trouble as a modal is the lack of daily resource supply due to the problem of war especially .
Last but not least, the destruction of the world. If war happen, There is no future for us anymore. the future of individuals in the country will no longer be guaranteed. Pity to the children of today who cannot feel living in peace. Examples, To give an instance, kids in palestine. Palestine. I feel bad for them because they can't get want then want as a kids than our kids in Malaysia. But, gratefully Ustaz Ebit Lew came to Palestine to help people there to supplement the necessities of life. Ustaz Ebit Lew gives the kids toys and they are very happy because they don't have before. Hence, war does not bring peace but destroys the future and that is why we need to make war illegal to save people’s future.
In nutshell, To recapitulate, war have given us a bad huge impact for our life. Only of us are wise to make deep decisions to be kind heart person and humanity so that war didn't not really happen in the future. So, in my humble opinion, I still agree with this statement that “war should be illegal" which are there is no shelter, causing starvation and no bright future.
Many people have the mindset that war is not something that they should worry about. But actually, you should. War is the state of armed conflict between different countries or different groups within a country. Therefore, in my opinion, I strongly agree that war should be illegal in our world because war will bring a lot of negative impact like making causing people hard to face hardship to survive, destroying the beauty of nature and the future of children will be darker.
First and foremost, it is worth considering that war will make people face hardship to survive. This is because when war happens, people will living in fear and they had to find a way to live even if forced to use or eat something unusual. For instance, people in Palestine did do not have clean water to survive during war. In order to survive they forced themselves to drink dirty water that can cause illnesses. People in Palestine also did not get enough sleep because they are very scared of Israel. Additionally, Israel also take every food hijacks their food supply that they have and this in inhumane action will lead people especially the children will get to face malnutrition. In short, war can make it harder for people hard to live their life in a normal way therefore war should be illegal.
Secondly, war also can destroying the beauty of nature in every country. Imagine that if the bomb lay on the ground, all of the trees, flowers and even the buildings will be gone in the blink of an eye. I am very sure that it is hard to restore it back since it needs a lot of time to clean and plant all of it. For example As an illustration, the atomic bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki on 1945 left deep scars on nature and this shows us just how destructive the damage from the atomic bomb. United States had to bomb Hiroshima and Nagasaki to bring the war with Japan to spare American lives. But they did it without thinking about the side effects of the bomb. Thus, war can really destroy the beauty of nature in the blink of an eye so we must really make war into a crime and declare that it is illegal and unacceptable.
Last but not least, war can make the future of children will be darker. Every person including a child have has the right to have their own ambition. Some of them wanted to be a doctor and some want to be a lawyer. But unfortunately, we cannot plan it without knowing what will happen next. We can take a look at the children in Syria. It is sad to know that young kids, who have a lot of ambition was forced to go to war and join the army. Imagine. They did not have any idea on how to use the tools for warfare but they had to. In consequence, they end up dying and severely injured. Thus, war is literally not a joke and can make children's future darker and that is why we must make war illegal to save the children.
In conclusion, To recapitulate, war is the scariest thing in the world that all people are afraid of. War should be illegal because it can make people hard to cause hardship to everyone to survive, destroying killing the beauty of nature and even make causing the future of children will be darker terrible if we do not do something to save the future generations. In order to avoid the war, our government should have a visionary leader like Tunku Abdul Rahman who is the Father of Independence. Therefore, we can live in a peaceful life and live in a harmoniousy country.
What is war? Does war have a detrimental effect on us? War is a quarrel that uses weapons to the point of killing fellow people, damaging society and destroying the economy. War will ensue as a result of a power struggle between countries. I absolutely agree with the statement which is ‘War Should Be Illegal’. The reason are war can claim the lives of innocent people, the joys of life will turn into the hardships of life and can make many victims lost limbs.
Firstly, the reason why I agree with the statement is because war can claim the lives of innocent people. This is because in war they do not care about anyone and do not care who are getting killed whether it’s an adult or a child. This causes a family to lose family members. As an illustration , as we know in Palestine many children die as a result of the war and this result in complete families not being able to unite. This shows that ‘War should be illegal’ because war can claim the lives of innocent people.
Secondly, war can make the joys of life will turn into the hardships of life. This is because as we know, no one wants war because it can lead to loss of happiness in life and not having time to do something we want. To illustrate, in Palestine the joy of life cannot be seen because the war has not stopped. This proves the statement ‘War should be illegal’ because war can make the joys of life disappears just like that.
For the last reason, war can make many victims lost limbs. This happens because there is no place to take refuge. The war is very cruel because an individual cannot live perfectly and desire of children who want to grow up perfectly disappears just like that. For instance, as we have seen on television and on social media, many children in Palestine has lost limbs. This shows that ‘War should be illegal’ because it can cause many people live imperfect lives.
I chose all three of these essays because they have very good concrete examples and are explained very clearly and easy for the readers to understand the examples they cite. From my reading, they explain a lot of the reasons why wars should be included in the illegal category as well as the various evidences that have been explained about wars that without us realizing are still happening a lot to this day. That made me realize that many wars have left a very negative impact to this day even though we are already in the era of modernity. Their essays still have some problems like lack in small conclusion section at the end of each important content and there are some grammatical errors. However, I am sure if they fix those weaknesses they are definitely able to produce good and quality essays in the future. Good job😍😍 Keep up the good work!!!!!
That's all from me(❁´◡`❁) Stay safe and take care everyone🎈
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